We have been given some feedback from a small audience on our draft edit, this is to help us improve our draft in the ways we already wanted to and now even more in the eyes of the audience. Firstly our audience commented on the credits, they thought that the placing of the credits was strange as Tom's looked out of place in comparison to mine and Rosie's. They also said that they thought it would be a good idea to add in some production company names.
Secondly they commented on the fact that their is no music in the edit, however we did pick out 3 different tracks that are supposed to run throughout our thriller but when we uploaded it to youtube their was some sort of problem and the tracks do not play. This is something we will definitely have sorted for our final draft. Another issue raised which we had already noticed ourselves is that part way through the video Tom's thumb is in front if the camera slightly and so we are going to have to re-record this part as well as several other things. One of the other things we are going to have to record again is when there are close-ups on mine and Rosie's faces as we run through the forest. This is because we are running and then when it cuts to a close-up we are standing still. Therefore we will have to change it so that we are also running on the close-ups. We will start our improvements next lesson.
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